Persuasive Writing

I think we should all have , one television free day per week . There are many reasons for this.
This can give you a better bed time for school the next day, and will give you more family time to have fun with them .

Firstly if you turn off your T.V once a day per week, you will get to bed earlier and be ready for school the next day. You can also do great work in class and give your teacher a happy day.

Secondly you would be able to have, more time with your family to have fun . You could go to the movies with them and watch a movie together .

I believe that turning off your T.V once a day would be a good idea. Don’t you?

Partly Cloudy

This is my picture that I drew in tux paint.

Title , Partly Cloudy

The main characters are a stork and a shady black cloud .

This movie is set up in the sky.

It started when the stork's delivered the new born babies to their homes and families .

There was one stork that found it hard to deliver the new born babies that the black shady cloud created for him. The babies
were dangerous creatures and different to the other new born babies .

At the end of the movie the stork went to another cloud to get some amour, that was when the shady black cloud got angry and show angry face. The shady black cloud was thinking his stork was leaving him for another cloud, but the stork came with a bag of amour to protect himself from getting hurt even tought he was already hurt.


I rated this movie ten out of ten. I rated it ten out of ten because it was a really interesting and very funny movie, and there were also lots of cute new borns were created.

Extreme Make Over Courtyard Edition.

This is going to be about making room seventeens courtyard into a play area and what is our plan with our to make a play area .
1. Me and Jessica have chosen to add a basketball hoop in my courtyard plan.

We have decided to add a basketball hoop because our courtyard would be great to turn into a hard court area.

I have researched and found a picture of a basketball hoop that can stick to the ground , but it is suppose to stick on to the wall I don't know what the price is as well. I have to do some more research to find out what the price is.

2. Our second idea was to put concrete in the grass area.

We both have decided to make the grass concrete so we can have a picnic table there, it better than siting on the deck because one time I was really tired and wanted to go sleep not until I felt something in my arm and it was really sharp , it was right in my arm I had to pull it out but it was stinging so I really couldn't.

I have being doing some research on picnic tables with my buddy Jessica , we didn't find out what the price are on picnic tables so we have do some more researching.

3. Our third idea was to put a new drinking fountain in the courtyard.

We decided to put in a new drinking fountain because the old fountain in room seventeen courtyard is really ruined and is busted.

Me and my buddy haven't found the price of our drinking fountain so we are going to have to do some more research to find out what the price is , but Jessica found it that would great.

Having Miss M on Fridays

Today room seventeen are having Miss M for our teacher today. She is a very good artist and she teaches glee .

We are doing our sketches , we got kite and our kites were from Miss M. It was for our art work. Then we all had to finish designs so we can put it on our kite.

That what the kite was for when we are finish we will print it on the kite . After that we all got to get our work all laminated kite.

Watch out for my finished kite....